Thursday, July 26, 2007

exams!

hey everybody!.i'm very happy because i've new group members.they are so kind and polite.they're names are me ,xuan wei,eliza,kimberly,dianne n yixiu.so good people!

2 comments:

Salz said...

So many girls in the group. Bwahahaha! Eeh. Gross. Kidding.

Its not 'so good people', you should say 'such good people'.

Since I'm going to become an English teacher, I might as well start now & educate you well. Hahaha.

-Lalala-
Moo

Salz said...

Oh yea. Spotted something else. "they're names", is not right. Its "Their names". What you wrote means, "They are". And when you put a list of names, you usually put yourself as the last person.
For example,
xuan wei,eliza,kimberly,dianne, yixiu and (myself)

P.S: If you hate me for correcting you, tell me! I'll stop this ugly habit. Haha